The Business Proposal

No, I am not starting my own business [yet], it just happens to be the title of the photo-narrative I am posting today!

A Photo-Narrative

Although I still have not found very much time to edit all of Steve’s photos yet, I did manage to put this together today:
It tells the story of two businessmen…

Please spend time to take a good look at their expressions.
How did this story start, and how did it end?
And (for the sake of interactivity on my blog), I would like you all to comment and provide the dialogue to this story (humor encouraged :) )

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13 comments
  1. Kyle said:

    It started off with the handsome one suggesting an idea for a new type of garbage disposal unit that their company could produce and sell. At first the boss liked it… then he realized that after the new product hit the market place they would have a boom in sales followed quickly by a complete halt of sales. In fact, this new disposal unit would work so well that new ones would never need to be purchased to replace the old ones. The handsome man just got demoted to inventing toilet plungers and cineng someone else to replace him in his old job… The End

  2. Steve said:

    From the looks of it, the little one just proposed something completely retarded to that stud in the red tie. He apparently didn’t realize how stupid it was, and when the guy in the red tie told him how dumb he was, reality came crashing down on the little runty guy. Luckily for the little guy, he wasn’t fired completely, only demoted. Sadly, he still didn’t make enough money afterward to support his family, so his wife left him and took the kids with her and the sad tale tragically ends with the little guy committing suicide with a hammer.

  3. Steve said:

    Nice photos by the way. They would have been even nicer had that little back part of the tie cooperated a little more. Haha Good job though.

    • Whitney said:

      Yah, good eye. Thanks for commenting and leaving feedback. I always appreciate it! Next time I will make sure to notice details like that before I get the shot – then my photos will be nearly perfect! ha jk

  4. Kyle said:

    Well you got it mostly right. See the good looking one did suggest a good idea. It was good for mankind but bad for the company. the one in the red tie was always upset that the handsome one in grey beat him in an ARM wrestle in front of their friends in Vegas. ever since then the guy in red had been looking for a way to get back at him. he turned the idea around and that is whyy he got demoted and resorted to the hammer. the guy in the red tie realized that he wad a douche and at himself to death using only mayonaisse. he was fat like the guy at the end of Dodgeball and died an old fat man, filled with regret, waiting to die alone… and then the heart attack took him slowly and full of shame…

  5. Kyle said:

    There was a wardrobe malfunction here…

  6. Steve said:

    However, that last portion of the story is not 100% correct either. The guy in the red tie was indeed a hate filled man all his life, but one Christmas day he met his real father, who was none other than Will Smith. Will Smith told the guy in the red tie that he had to leave the confines of his money changing house and mingle with his fellowmen. He was then haunted by three spirits and changed his ways. He lived the rest of his life stress free and never had a heart attack. Sadly, this life changing experience happened after the tragic hammer incident of the little guy. But, inspired by the new found knowledge that he was half black, the guy in the red tie died happily 50 years later.

  7. Kyle said:

    First off I hate you Steve lol.
    Yet again that story is not the whole truth either. You have 99.9% of the story right, but there are some missing pieces of information. Yes he was visited by three life changing spirits on Christmas Eve, and yes he was half black, no the father was not Will Smith it was Tito Jackson so nothing to brag about. He did live for 50 more years most of which was while being sustained on life support. After 50 years the man in the red tie woke up from his heart attack induced coma and promptly left the hospital. Happy with the chance to live again he got a job as a feather pillow stuffer. He could not go back to his old job as the company went under; after all, he did dismiss what could have been the greatest idea of the decade. Anyways, one day while at work at the feather pillow company he wandered down an unmarked hall and opened the door at the end. He fall 20 feet into a sealed off room. Slowly over the course of many hours feathers were dumped in from the ceiling; feathers to be used in the pillows. The red tie guy was slowly crushed to death under the weight of a metric ton of feathers. The real end!

  8. Steve said:

    Okay I can agree with that ending. Haha

  9. Kyle said:

    I can’t believe you agree to being the son of Tito Jackson lol. And you didn’t defend his honor… Ungrateful kids these days.

  10. Jack said:

    WOW you guys are f**king KIDS!!! OMG
    Great photos!!! Good Job Whit!

  11. Heyyyy if you do start your own business I’m down for the Makeup Artist ;) I’ll be taking the course at Taylor Andrews hopefully soon and I’m just starting to build my personal portfolio!

    On a side note, I just saw the post with the shoot and I LOVE it! Very professional but enjoyable ha. I think my favorite is the one where he’s standing to the side and his jacket/blazer is blowing behind him. :) You’re fantastic Whitney!

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